3 Problem Statements:
1. Clemson students, local residents, and visitors know about a select few restaurants that are located in downtown Clemson. But, these consumers do not know about other restaurants in the surrounding areas as well as those less known local restaurants. They need to know about these restaurants in order to make well informed, appropriate decisions when dining out. We will inform them about these restaurants by creating a restaurant database website that will highlight each restaurant in its appropriate category.
2. Clemon students, local residents, and visitors would like to be well informed consumers who know all their restaurant options including price, location, and menu items. Actually, these consumers are unaware of the remotely located, less commercial restaurants in the Clemson area. We will help them become the ideal, well informed consumers by creating a restaurant database website detailing locations, prices, and menu items of local restaurants.
3. The situation that Clemson students, residents, and visitors are facing can be described as consumers who are not informed about their dining options. The situation has negative consequences including poor dining experience, unimpressive service, and uneconimcal prices. We will alleviate the consequences by creating a website that will generate informed consumers.
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
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3 comments:
I enjoy 2 better. You compliment them by saying they would like to be ideal consumers. Then giving them the solution. 1 is the next best one in my opinion. 3 is last because of the way you end it by saying you'll reduce the consequences... You may want to say how you'll fix that problem. (e.g. by giving pricing range on restaurants. Showing high end, low end restaurants. etc)
we really like number two the best because it really details what the website will cover and really highlights the problem without being too wordy.
I think number one has the best structure and identifies the audience well, but it needs the specific problems addressed in number two to be your best option so I would try to use the first one with more specific problems addressed.
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